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This is the essay about my trip to Japan!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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I went to Japan for 3 nights last week. The destination was Osaka, and it was my third trip to Japan. This time, I traveled with my old friends. Excepting me, they were first time to go Japan. I was worry because I couldn't speak Japanese, and I had no sense to find route. Eventually, everyone was okay, and it was a good trip except weather. It was too hot, and I felt like I was in the water. It was not raining, but it was moist. We were exhausted right after left our hotel. Korea was also hot, but I felt Japan was hotter than Korea was. Have you gone to Korea or Japan before?
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I went to Japan for 3 nights last week. The destination was Osaka, and it was my third trip to Japan. This time, I traveled with my old friends. Except for me, it was their first time to go to Japan. I was worried because I cannot speak Japanese, and I have a terrible sense of direction. Eventually, everyone enjoyed, and it was a good trip except for weather. It was too hot, and I felt like I was in the water. It was not raining, but it was humid. We were exhausted right after we left our hotel. It was also hot in Korea, but I felt Japan's weather was hotter than Korea's. Have you gone to Korea or Japan before?


Hi, Jin! :) I haven't been to either Japan nor Korea, but I am looking forward to it. :)

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