This is the main story about trip to Japan~!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
First day, I went to Ghibli Park. Actually, I saw only 3 movies by Ghibli. But I love 'The cat returns', so it was deserved that I went to. It was huge, but we could see all areas. Because we didn't get in line to take a picture with characters. We just took pictures we were passing by. Next day, 3 people went to Aquarium and me and another just looked around Osaka. We gathered again, we went to the umeda sky building. It's observatory. We were all tired, but we didn't give up to see a night view. It was beautiful, but it was challenging because there were a lot of people..
튜터 교정 답변
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