I think this is last essay about trip to Japan~~~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The last day, we went to the Universal Studio Japan~! My friends and I were so expecting it. Since whoever went to there said "It was wonderful!" But all of us was disappointed. There were less rides, and there were too many people. We had to wait for about 1 hour for lunch. They had leak seats for eating. The weather was hot, but they didn't have any place to avoid strong sunlight. It was challenging day.. However the parade and show were exciting, we just wanted to go out and go to the hotel. So we entered to there at 7 a.m, and we went out from there at 3:30 p.m.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!