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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 08. 10 조회 3226

Making sentences part 2!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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학생 제출 원문
He flew in his parents who lived in another area.
Come to think of it, I didn't lock my house.
That travel agency is having lots of complaints.
Every passenger is not allowed smoking on the flight.
Our itinerary is so tight.
We have to make a reservation before we enter.
Their relationship is awkward, because they broke up latest.
Would that be considered a score?
I missed downloading the mileage tracking log!
I went to Europe couple times on business.
You can be reimbursed all of traveling expenses.
The gas cost has been raising.
I will charge this dinner as a business expenses.
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He flew in his parents who lived in another another area.
Come to think of it, I didn't lock my house.
That travel agency is having lots of complaints.
All passengers are not allowed to smoke on the flight.
Our itinerary is so tight.
We have to make a reservation before we enter.
Their relationship is awkward because they broke up recently.
Would that be considered a score?
I missed downloading the mileage tracking log!
I went to Europe a couple times on business.
You can be reimbursed for all of your travel expenses.
The gas price has been rising.
I will charge this dinner as a business expense.

 

Hello, Jin! :) You did a very good job here! However, you still need to be mindful of the words you use in your sentences. Nevertheless, you did a wonderful job. :) 
-Teacher Jin

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