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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 08. 18 조회 3260

It had been a long time I drunk a lot!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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I met my old coworker and my old friends on Saturday. On the first, I went to a shop to buy goods of my favorite artiste. On the second, I met my old coworker for lunch. And finally, I met my high school friends. I don't know how I can call it in English, we played in escape room. It's very popular to young people. It's to solve the problems and escape the room in limited time as it's name. After that, we went to the izakaya, and drunk a lot. I don't like drink, but we had fun time talking about our old story in high school. Luckly I didin't have hangover next day.
튜터 교정 답변

I met my old coworker and high school friends last Saturday. But first, I went to a shop to buy goods of my favorite artist. Then, I met my old coworker for lunch. And lastly, I met my high school friends. I don't know how I can call it in English, but we played in an escape room. It's very popular with young people. It is a game where you need to solve some problems in order to escape the room in a limited time, as its name suggests. After that, we went to an izakaya, and drank a lot. I don't like drinking, but we had a fun time talking about our experiences in high school. Luckily, I didn't have a hangover the next day.

 

Hi there, Jin! Thank you for sharing this with me. I am so happy that you had fun last weekend. Let's talk more tomorrow. Have a great day!

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