It had been a long time I drunk a lot!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I met my old coworker and my old friends on Saturday. On the first, I went to a shop to buy goods of my favorite artiste. On the second, I met my old coworker for lunch. And finally, I met my high school friends. I don't know how I can call it in English, we played in escape room. It's very popular to young people. It's to solve the problems and escape the room in limited time as it's name. After that, we went to the izakaya, and drunk a lot. I don't like drink, but we had fun time talking about our old story in high school. Luckly I didin't have hangover next day.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!