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Making sentences time is coming back~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, jin! Have a nice weekend~! And I hope the weather is better in your country~!

I can't believe you copy your assignment from others.
I thougth I would prepare the meeting first.
They will have a party next year, I suppose.
I know you are under pressure about being in charge of this task.
Our department had hard time to earn the president's trust.
The very first story is how they fell in love to each other.
My parents remember when I was hurt severe like it was yesterday.
She's hard on herself everytime.
Everything that I prepared down the drain.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello, Jin! Have a nice weekend~! And I hope the weather is better in your country~!

I can't believe you copy your assignment from others.
I thought I would prepare the meeting first.
They will have a party next year, I suppose.
I know you are under pressure for being in charge of this task.
Our department had hard time earning the president's trust.
The very first story is about how they fell in love with each other.
My parents remember when I was hurt severely, like it was yesterday.
She is always hard on herself.
Everything that I prepared went down the drain.

Hi, Jin! How are you? Last weekend's weather was great, and I hope that it continues. :)

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