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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 09. 07 조회 3096

I have a good news wanted to tell you!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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Hi, Jin! I have a good news! The score of economy exam was come this Friday. I finally passed it! My goal was over 600 score, and I got 675 score. So I don't need to take this exam again~! I told you I messed up, but it wasn't just me. Everyone was hard, and most of people failed. I was heard, this exam was particularly difficult. I worried before taking the exam and coming the result, but now I'm feel free~~ I can only focus on English now! It's all thanks to your cheer!
튜터 교정 답변

Hi, Jin! I have good news! The results of the economics exam were released this Friday. I finally passed it! My goal was to get a score over 600, and I got 675. So, I don't need to take this exam again. I told you I messed up, but it wasn't just me. Everyone had a hard time, and a lot failed. I heard this exam was particularly difficult. I was worried before taking the exam and about the result, but now I feel free. I can focus on English now! It's all thanks to your encouragement!

 

Hi, Jin! Happy Monday! Congratulations on passing that exam! I am so happy for you! I think that is something to celebrate! Let's talk more about that tomorrow. Have a great day! :)
-Teacher Jin

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