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I made some sentences~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, Jin! I hope you're having good weekends~

If your idea comes out into the world, it will prompt all employee to get disappointment.
All of her ideas fell on deaf ears.
He will be on top of his life.
Her desperate didn't reach to her parents.
They finally achieved consensus about environmental pollution.
We need to secure the big space for the dinner party.
He almost catches up the first runner.
Water is definitely necessary material to human.
We had to come back to our country because of such and such reason.
A lot of illegal immigrants move to another country constantly.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello, Jin! I hope you're having a good weekend.

If your idea comes out into the world, it will prompt disappointment to all employees.
All of her ideas fell on deaf ears.
He will be on top of his life.
Her desperation didn't reach to her parents.
They finally came to a consensus on the issue of environmental pollution.
We need to reserve the large space for the dinner party.
He almost catches up to the first runner.
Water is an essential substance for humans.
We had to return to our country because of such and such reason.
A lot of illegal immigrants frequently relocate to other countries.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!