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This is second essay of making sentence.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Her daughter likes playing along with is uncle.
You don't need to work here anymore, that's it.
Our company's the most important plan of next year is product launch.
We're going to get a press conference with a director and three actors.
However he announced instead of his boss in front of stockholders, he completed successfully.
I guess they'll require us extra pay.
She is planned, so she makes a to-do list everyday.
We need to buy a car that contains all of options.
He was excited to let you know lots of tips of work.
You need to check the following correct that I wrote.
튜터 교정 답변

Her daughter likes playing along with her uncle.
You don't need to work here anymore, that's it.
Our company's the most important plan for next year is product launch.
We're going to have a press conference with a director and three actors.
He completed the task successfully, however he announced it in front of the stockholders instead oof his boss.
I guess they'll require us to pay extra.
She is organized, therefore she makes a to-do list every day.
We need to buy a car that has all of the options.
He was excited to share several work-related tips with you.
You need to check the following sentences that I wrote.


Hi, Jin! Thank you for your efforts to improve your sentence construction. :) Always enjoy learning, and keep on improving. Have a lovely day!
~Teacher Jin

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