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Job interview

작성자: hunet_0to7-001246 담당 튜터: ElaineG2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, my name is _______. I am excited about the opportunity to join InBody as an Investor Relations Officer.

I have extensive experience in investor relations across the pharmaceutical, biotech, cosmetics, and manufacturing sectors.

I am committed to continuous improvement in my role as an IR professional. To enhance my skills, I participated in IR study groups to build strong foundation in IR principles and network of professionals who shares valuable insights and resources.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello, my name is _____. I am excited about the opportunity to join InBody as an Investor Relations Officer.

I have extensive experience in investor relations across pharmaceutical, biotech, cosmetics, and manufacturing sectors.

I am committed to continuous improvement in my role as an IR professional. To enhance my skills, I participated in IR study groups to build strong foundation in IR principles and network of professionals who share valuable insights and resources.

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