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Job interview 2

작성자: hunet_0to7-001246 담당 튜터: ElaineG2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Additionally, I complicated MBA with flying colors, that makes me better business understanding enabling persuasive communication with investors.

In Zero to Seven as an IR manager, I have not only directly engaged with investors but also conducted IR events such as corporate day, NDRs.
튜터 교정 답변

Additionally, I passed my MBA with flying colors. That gives me a better business understanding, enabling persuasive communication with investors.

In Zero to Seven as an IR manager, I have not only directly engaged with investors but also conducted IR events such as corporate day, NDRs.

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