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The second essay of making sentences~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Would you be comfortable flying 10 hours with an economy seat?
I would be happy to make dinner for my children.
She still meets old colleagues of hers.
I already explained about the product to customer on the phone.
I tried to contact to him, but He didn't answer.
You should be aware of your position before you speak.
We have to equip all gears when cooking.
Let's put together the brief.
I newly fell in love with fusion Korean foods.
This AI speaker is promising in this market.
My worksite is so dangerous, so I have to wear a helmet before work.
튜터 교정 답변

Would you be comfortable flying for 10 hours in an economy seat?
I would be happy to make dinner for my children.
She still meets her former colleagues.
I already explained the product to a customer over the phone.
I tried to contact to him, but he didn't answer.
You should be aware of your position before you speak.
We must have all the necessary equipment when cooking. 
Let's put together the briefs of the meetings.
I recently fell in love with Korean fusion food.
This AI speaker is promising in this market.
My worksite is so dangerous, so I must wear a helmet before starting work.


Hi, Jin! You also did a good job here! Keep up the good work! Keep on improving your sentences and vocabulary. Let's talk tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Jin

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