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The essay of making sentences!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, Jin! How's going? I'm good, and the weather is so nice these days in Korea! I hope your country is nice, too!

Our new project is running smoothly in every side.
She felt confident, but she massed up.
He's extremely anxious when he has to talk in front of audiences.
Let's finalize today's task.
They offered good project to us, but there're terms.
We need to come down on the price to draw more customers.
You're demanding me impossible things.
You should learn concession from peers.
I was sure my offer was perfect, but they did a counter proposal to me.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello, Jin! How's it going? I'm good, and the weather is so nice these days in Korea! I hope your country's weather is nice, too!

Our new project is running smoothly from all sides.
She felt confident, but she messed up.
He's extremely anxious when he has to talk in front of audiences.
Let's finalize today's task.
They offered a good project to us, but there were terms.
We need to come down on the price to draw more customers.
You're making impossible demands on me.
You should learn concession from your peers.
I was sure my offer was perfect, but they made a counterproposal to me.

 

Hi, Jin! I am fine, and my weekend went well. I have a cold right now, but I am getting better. Regarding the weather, it has been raining since last night. I hope it stops soon. Anyway, I wish you a wonderful Monday! Let's talk tomorrow. :)
~Jin

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