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Last Saturday and Sunday, I went to a family trip
We went with the mother in law
I often trip with mother in law
We went there to see the beach
I go to the beach twice a year in the summer and winter
The first good thing this good view on the sea
and I like take a walk on the beach
I love to see the sea
Nowadays, because of the summer beach korea has a lot of people
Many people is swimming on the sea and eat the sashimi.
Sashimi is eat live fish
Sashimi very dilicious
I love Sashmi
-> Hi Beth,
-> Thank you for the feedback.
-> I want to ask for feedback on the document below.
-> Last Saturday and Sunday, I went to a family trip. We went with the my mother-in-law.
-> I often go on a trip with my mother-in-law. We went there to see the beach.
-> I go to the beach twice a year, in the summer and winter
-> The first good thing I like this is the good view on of the sea and I like take a walk on the beach. I love to see the sea.
-> Nowadays, Because of the it's summer, beach korea has a there are lots of people at the beach.
-> Many people is are swimming on in the sea and eat the sashimi. Sashimi is eat live fresh fish. Sashimi very dilicious delicious. and I love Sashmi sashimi.
Hi David,
Thank you for sending another composition and for telling me about your trip to the beach. I hope your
mother-in-law had a great time, too.
I will call again tomorrow for our class, okay? 
-Beth-