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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 10. 05 조회 3058

I want to tell you something!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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Hi, Jin. I don't remember that I told you this before, I'm going to Canada for working holiday this month. Surprise! I planed it 6 months ago, and this month is the last month living in Korea. I'm hectic these days to pack my luggages. Our class'll keep going on to next year, and I'm going to join it constantly. But I might change a fixed class time, or apply for a postponement of a class. I'm going to try to keep my class time, but there is a time difference, so I thought I need to let you know about this. I'm sorry to tell you about it late. Have a nice weekend, Jin! I always appreciate you!
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Hi, Jin. I don't remember if I told you this before, but I'm going to Canada on a working holiday this month. Surprise! I planned it 6 months ago, and this is my last month in Korea. I'm busy packing my luggage these days. Our class will continue throughout the next year, and I'm going to attend it regularly. However, I may change the scheduled class time, or request a class postponement. I'm going to try to keep my class time, but there is a time difference, so I thought I'd let you know. I'm sorry to tell you about it late. Have a nice weekend, Jin! I always appreciate you!

 

Hello, Jin. Don't worry. I understand. I hope that you'll have a great time there. Make sure to bring your jacket or coat because I heard that it is very cold in Canada. Good luck, and I hope that you'll succeed on whatever you're going to do there. I'll always expect you to attend our classes, of course. Have a safe trip and always take care. :) 
~Jin

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