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I almost missed writing essay~!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Jin! I had tired Saturday. I'll tell you about Saturday in next essay. Anyway, have a good weekends!

I will place an order at 5 in the evening.
I guarantee that there will be more learning to follow.
She went through a car accident last year.
There were a lot of resources in mine many years ago.
They ordered a large project even it was their initial order.
I suspect that he's lying to me.
I heard it will rain today. If that the case, we have to take an umbrella.
I'm not sure about the mayor will attend at the conference.
All computers crashed and the office went to dark at the same time.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi, Jin! I had an exhausting Saturday. I'll tell you about my Saturday in my next essay. Anyway, have a good weekend!

I will place an order at 5 in the evening.
I guarantee that there will be more learning to come.
She went through a car accident last year.
Many years ago, the mine had a lot of resources. 
They requested a large project, even though it was their first order.
I suspect that he's lying to me.
I heard it will rain today. If that the case, we have to take an umbrella.
I'm not sure whether the mayor will attend the conference.
All computers crashed and the office went dark at the same time.


Hi, Jin! You did a wonderful job making sentences here. Keep up the good work! My weekend was good. I tried to rest and I am glad I was able to. Let's talk tomorrow. Have a great day!

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