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작성자: yanadoo-37_hcc451726 담당 튜터: JeffGr2usa
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i'm in a university now.
my class mate is announcing his report about depression disoder during i write this????
i've got a depression disoder for a long time.
maybe i was born to live with this black dog.
it's no big deal to me for nowdays.
i've thought that i have to write some sentence on here to improve my write skills but, i didn't. what a lazy..????
finally i wrote. and i decided what i‘m going to write on here about anything to mine.
i'm sorry jeff. i don't wanna bother you but which's already happend????
튜터 교정 답변

I'm in a university now.
my classmate is announcing his report about depression disorder while I am writing this.
I've got a depression disorder for a long time.
maybe I was born to live with this black dog.
It's no big deal to me right now.
I thought that I had to write some sentences here to improve my writing skills but, I didn't. what a lazy..????
finally, I wrote. and I decided what I‘m going to write here about anything to mine.
I'm sorry jeff. I don't wanna bother you but what's already happened????

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