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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 10. 29 조회 2995

i love dogs

작성자: yanadoo-37_hcc451726 담당 튜터: JeffGr2usa
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i've hurted my back because i played somedog who guards my university. i‘ve been to university for a year but i didn't know he is there to guard. i wish i would‘ve known early. if i would've known i could've played with him on every saturday! i love so much dogs! when i met him first, he tied so i thought he wants to play with someone. then i did what he wants. but i think i tried too hard. he's a big dog and he was so enjoy and he so many times tried to tackle to me. i had to do with him so i got injury. but i'm not regret because i love dogs..!
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I've hurt my back because I played with a dog who guards my university. I‘ve been to university for a year but I didn't know he was there to guard. I wish I had known earlier. if I had known I could've played with him every Saturday! I love dogs! when I met him for the first time, he was sad so I thought he wanted to play with someone. then I did what he wanted. but I think I tried too hard. he's a big dog and he was so happy and he tried to tackle me and I got injured. but I do not regret it because I love dogs..!

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