i love dogs
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학생 제출 원문
i've hurted my back because i played somedog who guards my university. i‘ve been to university for a year but i didn't know he is there to guard. i wish i would‘ve known early. if i would've known i could've played with him on every saturday! i love so much dogs! when i met him first, he tied so i thought he wants to play with someone. then i did what he wants. but i think i tried too hard. he's a big dog and he was so enjoy and he so many times tried to tackle to me. i had to do with him so i got injury. but i'm not regret because i love dogs..!
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