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Restart writing an essay~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi there! I'm back~! I didn't expect that I returned, however please take care of me again!

Did he make a mistake? It doesn't make sense.
He briefed about our new project, but I never understood.
You worth to feel great about your accomplishment.
Our department was selected to transfer to headquarters.
As she joined our class, the mood was revived.
I just a mere employee, so I've never attended any conference.
He always says outrageous says.
Most of regional compay have trouble with worker lack.
I don't like too much modest people.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi there! I'm back! I didn't expect to returned but please take care of me again!

Did he make a mistake? It doesn't make sense.
He briefed us on our new project, but I didn't understand it.
You should feel great about your accomplishment.
Our department was selected to transfer to headquarters.
As she joined our class, the good mood was revived.
I am just a mere employee, so I've never attended any conferences.
He always says outrageous things.
Most regional companies have trouble with a lack of workers.
I don't like overly modest people.

 

Hi, Jin! It’s great to have you back! You did a good job here! Just keep learning more words to enhance your sentences. Have a fantastic day!

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