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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 10. 31 조회 2827

This is the second essay!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I had mixed feelings when I studied to abroad.
We need to cook and at the same time we need to clean our home.
Let's get on our feet and start a new project.
Surreal something is going on for this month.
It keeps developing more and more. The initial product was terrible.
He gives comforting says to whoever.
She is always uncomfortable to face an unfair situation.
The air is essential metarial to all life in earth.
He has been packing up his things for about 2 weeks.
튜터 교정 답변

I had mixed feelings when I studied abroad.
We need to cook, and at the same time, we need to clean our home.
Let's get on our feet and start a new project.
Something surreal is going on this month.
It keeps developing more and more. The initial product was terrible.
He gives comforting words to anyone.
She is always feels uncomfortable facing an unfair situation.
Air is essential for all life on Earth.
He has been packing up his things for about 2 weeks.

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