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Making sentences time~! This is the first!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi there, Jin! Have a good weekends~ See you Monday!

Everyone cried at the same time they bid farewell to him.
I hope there are a lot of happy on a journey to your future.
She always proposes a toast to new employees in every staff dinner.
People often choice familiar things in new environment.
Don't cut low his achievements.
Since only one his behavior, I was disappointed.
She makes many incredible results in this company.
All parents cherish the memories with their children.
He maybe stands a cafe up ahead.
Don't tell me the shabby building up ahead is our new house.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi there, Jin! Have a good weekend! Talk to you on Monday!

Everyone cried at the same time when they bid farewell to him.
I hope there is a lot of happiness on your journey to the future.
She always proposes a toast to the new employees in every staff dinner.
People often choose familiar things in a new environment.
Don't downplay his achievements.
Since it was only one of his behaviors, I was disappointed.
She achieves many incredible results in this company.
All parents cherish the memories they have with their children.
He may be opening a cafe up ahead.
Don't tell me that shabby building up ahead is our new house.

Hi, Jin! Happy Monday! Thank you for practicing your grammar and sentence construction. Keep up the good work! Just keep practicing and improving. Have a great day!
~Teacher Jin

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