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I missed writing essays last week. So this essay is about the last class.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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Hi, Jin! I missed writing an essay last week because I was sick. T.T Be careful your health!!

Nobody told him the time was up, so he did all the way the task that he didn't need to do.
Since the financial crisis, our team got ourselves into.
I received the request to expand the room of concert.
It is not a big deal, so she'll approve it.
This company's executives are stealing their money.
Fitting one's position is more important than one's personality.
He can't distinguish what he values on.
Pleas let me know you guys' absent intention before one day.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi, Jin! I missed writing an essay last week because I was sick. T.T Be careful with your health!!

Nobody told him that the time was up, so he completed the tasks he didn't need to do.
Since the financial crisis, our team has faced many challenges.
I received the request to expand the concert room.
It is not a big deal, so she'll approve it.
This company's executives are stealing their money.
Fitting one's position is more important than one's personality.
He can't distinguish what he values.
Pleas let me know if you guys will be absent at least one day in advance.


Hi, Jin! You did a wonderful job here. Just keep practicing and continue learning more English expressions. Let's talk tomorrow. Have a great day!
~Jin

 

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