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Second essay! I always thank you for your hlep!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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You can pay extra bag when you check in using an app.
You bet I can go to your birthday party.
This restaurant is well known as requiring highway robbery.
Do you know the price of a bag of jelly?
This is a display. The new one available for purchase is over there.
Don't tell me that clerk is my ex-girlfriend.
Be careful don't drink alcohols. Only water is complimentary drinks.
You can choose whatever in these beverages.
She never drinks soft drinks. She doesn't like carbonic acid.
You will pass away if you drink this beverage. It's a spirit.
튜터 교정 답변

You can pay for an extra bag when you check in using the app.
You bet I can go to your birthday party!
This restaurant is well-known for its highway robbery prices.
Do you know the price of a bag of jelly?
This is just a display. The new one available for purchase is over there.
Don't tell me that clerk is my ex-girlfriend.
Be careful! Don't drink alcohol. Only water is complimentary.
You can choose whatever you like from these beverages.
She never drinks soft drinks because she doesn't like carbonated drinks.
You will die if you drink this beverage. It's pure alcohol.

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