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#metoo

작성자: firb_lx0003_parkys 담당 튜터: Brandiss2usa
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I disagree that the movement has overreacted because #metoo has uncovered a lot of secretive abuse and empowered victims to come forward and only the abusers that committed crimes have faced repercussions.

With #me too trend, we got to know that the issues of sexual assault and harassment of women is more wide spread and deeply rooted in our societies and we should protect the victims who has suffered from the past nightmares and give the opportunities to recover themselves.
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Very good job!

 

I disagree that the movement has overreacted because #metoo has uncovered a lot of secretive abuse and empowered victims to come forward and only the abusers that committed crimes have faced repercussions.

With #me too trend, we got to know that the issues of sexual assault and harassment of women is more wide spread and deeply rooted in our societies and we should protect the victims who has suffered from the past nightmares and give the opportunities to recover themselves.

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