childfree
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I disagree with people choosing a childfree life, because it is not normal and family is more important than my single life.
When I got married, I did not realized that my children are such a important motivation for me and my wife to go forward and handle whatever difficulties we meet in our life, and I could not define my marriage without my children.
So I think marriage and children means normal family and happiness
When I got married, I did not realized that my children are such a important motivation for me and my wife to go forward and handle whatever difficulties we meet in our life, and I could not define my marriage without my children.
So I think marriage and children means normal family and happiness
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