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The new book has too many words that I didn't know..

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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I think I'm not that level to study with this book.. I feel the level jump to much high level. I got some help of translation, but I tried to translate it by myself. This essay is making sentences with new words that I knew at first. Fighting!!!!

Every citizen drinks stagnant water in Korea.
Having degree is the optimum that this company requires.
Since the drought, all farmera are getting hard time in this season.
Kimchi is the typical fermented food.
The stock has big variability, so it's not good for the beginner.
Her mayjor is genetic engineering, and she will be a researcher.
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I think I'm not at that level to study with this book. I feel like the level jumped too much to a higher level. I got some help from translation, but I tried to translate the words by myself. This essay is about creating sentences with new words that I didn't know at first. Fighting!

Every citizen drinks purified water in Korea. 
Stagnant water means water that is not flowing and left sitting for long periods of time. 

Having a degree is the optimal requirement for this company. 
Since the drought, all farmers are having a hard time this season.
Kimchi is a typical example fermented food.
The stock has high variability, so it's not good for the beginners.
Her major is genetic engineering, and she will be a researcher.

 

Hi, Jin. You did a great job here. Anyway, we can talk about how you feel about the new book tomorrow. Have a great day!

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