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작성자: yanadoo-37_hcc451726 담당 튜터: JeffGr2usa
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today it's raining when i woke up. so i was annoying because i don't like rain. i don't like to use umbrellra. hands is only two. it's normal that one hand grab a something or inside my pants poket and other hand is free. but rainy days i have to grab a umbrellra. and i hate that point! no hands feel free! oh my poor hands:( anyway thesedays i've been trying to shedowing friends. it's too hard for me. why american people speak so fast? would youguys please speak slow for me? haha i know i have to try more and i can deal with this!
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today it was raining when I woke up I found it annoying because I wouldn't say I like rain. I'm not particularly eager to use an umbrella I only have two hands and one will have to hold the umbrella. normally, one hand grabs something or is inside my pants pocket and the other hand is free. but on rainy days I have to grab an umbrella. and I hate that point! no hands feel free! oh, my poor hands:( Anyway these days I've been trying to shadow my friends. it's too hard for me. why do American people speak so fast? Would you guys please speak slowly for me? I know I have to try more and I can deal with this!

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