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pay to win games

작성자: firb_lx0003_parkys 담당 튜터: Brandiss2usa
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I agree that Pay-to-win games are harmless because people should be responsible for their own purchases and as they paid, they might focus on the games for fun and despite of those investment, it’s just a game for them, not any more.

I heard that some one who are seriously mad on bets and results, might loose their minds , but it is not the common but they might be recovered with sort of the warning from the gaming companies.
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I agree that Pay-to-win games are harmless because people should be responsible for their own purchases and as they paid, they might focus on the games for fun. Despite the investment, it’s just a game for them, not any more.

I heard that some one who is seriously mad on bets and results, might loose their minds. It is not that common, but they might recover with sort of a warning from the gaming companies.

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