The last day of November~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Jin! The last day of November! Are you having a good weekend? Korea is cold and snowy. It's a good justification for staying at home!
Anyway, I'm reading articles in my new book in advance, it was hard for reading, but now the contents were interesting. I like subjects that make people argue. Few years ago, I talked about animals rights with my friends. My opinion was 'All animals have to live in natural habitats.' One of my friends told me 'Haven't you ever thought your pay for zoo can help animals?' I couldn't think like that. These articles make me think another thoughts. So it's fun.
Anyway, I'm reading articles in my new book in advance, it was hard for reading, but now the contents were interesting. I like subjects that make people argue. Few years ago, I talked about animals rights with my friends. My opinion was 'All animals have to live in natural habitats.' One of my friends told me 'Haven't you ever thought your pay for zoo can help animals?' I couldn't think like that. These articles make me think another thoughts. So it's fun.
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