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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 11. 30 조회 2851

This is the last essay of this week.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Add recipient leads to subsidy extension.
Even if you raise livestock as a product, you have to raise them in a good environment.
Herbicide is good chemical for human, in other hand it hurts to all animals.
I saw a farmer grazed her horses in the field.
It looks like he almost accommodated with his new class.
This product can make high loss, if not it can yield a good return.
She identified her parents was in home as soon as she got home.
We're seeking an efficient person work for us.
It's too hard now to find fertile farmlands that not be used.
Baby ducks eat weed and they help farming.
튜터 교정 답변

Adding recipient leads to an extension of the subsidy.
Even if you are raising livestock for profit, you have to provide them with a good environment.
Herbicide is a useful chemical for humans, on the other hand, it hurts all animals.
I saw a farmer grazing her horses in the field.
It looks like he has almost adapted to his new class.
This product can result in a high loss, but if not, it can yield a good return.
She realized that her parents were at home as soon as she got home.
We're seeking an efficient person to work for us.
It's too hard now to find fertile farmland that is not being used.
Baby ducks eat weeds and help with farming.

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