plastic straw
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I agree with the plastic straw ban because they damage the ecosystem seriously and even to me and my family.
If we saw the case of the turtle with the straw inside its nose, we could imagine how micro plastic endanger our lives and suffer from strange illness.
And we need to save wildlife and ourself,
so we need to act as much as we can, starting with the small activities like removing plastic straws and plastic cups and bags
If we saw the case of the turtle with the straw inside its nose, we could imagine how micro plastic endanger our lives and suffer from strange illness.
And we need to save wildlife and ourself,
so we need to act as much as we can, starting with the small activities like removing plastic straws and plastic cups and bags
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