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Net neutrality(updated)

작성자: firb_lx0003_parkys 담당 튜터: Brandiss2usa
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I disagree with Net Neutrality because piracy is a real problem and cuts into the profits of corporations.
so in the big internet world we need to protect our companies and families.

without an authority in control people and children are at risk and naive from dangerous content that drive us into wrong decision like purchases, sexual harrasment, medicine-addiction and sudden suicides etc.

in AI era, some biased contents which has already been chosen by smart system might touch me and my family for their profit creation with the skins of introduction and advertisement and educations.
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I disagree with Net Neutrality because piracy is a real problem and cuts into the profits of corporations.
 In the big internet world we need to protect our companies and families.

Without an authority in control, people and children are at risk and naive from dangerous content that drive us into wrong decision like purchases, sexual harrasment, medicine-addiction and sudden suicides etc.

In AI era, some biased content which has already been chosen by smart system might touch my family and I for their profit creation with the skins of introduction and advertisement and educations.

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