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It was a hard week, but I did my work.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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Hi, Jin! It was a hard week for me and Korean as well. How was your week? In Korea, many citizens protected Assembly from the traitors all night long. Some facts are revealed through the articles; The army moved to rule Assembly, and the president(now we don't call him as a president) hided in the underground bunker after he declared martial law. Yoon did a public statement today, but it was only two minutes and the content was unuseless. An impreachment agenda vote is today 5 pm. Angry citizens are demonstrating in front of Assembly to keep our liberal democracy. Please wish us luck.
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Hi, Jin! It was a hard week for me and for Korea as well. How was your week? In Korea, many citizens protected the Assembly from the traitors all night long. Some facts are revealed through some articles. According to them, the army moved to take control of the Assembly, and the president ( who we no longer call president) hid in an underground bunker after declaring martial law. Yoon did a public statement today, but it was only two minutes and the content was useless. An impreachment agenda vote is scheduled for 5pm today. Angry citizens are demonstrating in front of the Assembly to protect our liberal democracy. Please wish us luck.

 

Hello, Jin. I had a nice time talking with you today. My last week was busy, but this week will be even busier. Anyway, I really hope the situation in your country gets resolved soon. Just always be careful and stay updated on the news. Let's talk again tomorrow. Have a great day!

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