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I also wrote an essay in this chaos..

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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I started to write this essay at 4 pm but yet I couldn't finish it at 11:30 pm bacuase of the country..TOT

Some elitists are merely wealthy but believe they have power.
Customarily, the traitors have to be arrested immediately.
There is only rank between a president and citizens, but there's no hierarchy.
Lionel Messi is still showing his prowess.
It is the mandatory fact that the army don't rule Assembly when the martial law is declared.
The legislators are receiving a ballot initiative.
The long-standing plitical party follows suit the same action that they alreay did.
튜터 교정 답변

I started writing these sentences at 4 pm, but I still couldn't finish it at 11:30 pm because of the situation in our country. TOT

Some elitists are merely wealthy but believe they have power.
Customarily, the traitors should be arrested immediately.
There is only a rank between the president and the citizens, but there's no hierarchy.
Lionel Messi is still showing his prowess.
It is the mandatory fact that the army does not rule the Assembly when the martial law is declared.
The legislators are receiving a ballot initiative.
The long-standing political party follows the same action that they have already taken.

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