The last one of this week.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We will protect our contry and our life. Fighting!!!!
Korean president crippled to all citizens through martial law.
If this situaion keep going on, Korean debt is increasing more and more, and finally IMF can break out agian.
The government have to offer a new incentives for citizen.
The Korean currency value dropped on the ground because of a president.
The tiredness of people accrued since 5 days ago.
All people who supported the traitor will be penalized inevitably.
We have to cut this vicious cycle this year.
Korean president crippled to all citizens through martial law.
If this situaion keep going on, Korean debt is increasing more and more, and finally IMF can break out agian.
The government have to offer a new incentives for citizen.
The Korean currency value dropped on the ground because of a president.
The tiredness of people accrued since 5 days ago.
All people who supported the traitor will be penalized inevitably.
We have to cut this vicious cycle this year.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!