Airport Security
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학생 제출 원문
I agree with increased airport security because safety is more important than privacy and specially it is the only one important for airplane traveler. Once a tiny material of terrorist could make all disappeared in the air, which is a real horror and always make me prepared before getting on the planes. And terrorism is a real and ever present threat for our traveling and it should not be neglected at every moment.
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