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New essay~!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi there, Jin! How're you? I'm writing these sentences with watching the second impeachment agenda vote live at the same time. I hope the agenda passes this time. Anyway, Have a nice weekend!

The fact with exorbitant emotion can lose trust.
The medicine undermines the illness.
He backed down and rised opponent's hand together.
Don't do tit-for-tat to a bad petitioner.
Her accent alienates her friends.
The trust between the citizens and the president can be irreparale.
He pocketed the primary technology through espionage.
The other company outbids for us.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi there, Jin! How are you? I'm writing these sentences while watching the second impeachment motion vote live. I hope the motion passes this time. Anyway, Have a nice weekend!

The fact driven by exorbitant emotion can lose trust.
The medicine undermines the illness. (You can also use words such as 'treat' or 'combat' instead of 'undermine.')
He backed down and raised his opponent's hand.
Don't engage in tit-for-tat with a bad petitioner.
Her accent alienates her friends.
The trust between the citizens and the president can be irreparable.
He pocketed the primary technology through espionage.
The other company outbids for us.

 

Hi Jin! I really had a great weekend! Thank you! With the result of the vote on the impeachment motion, I assume your weekend was also good. Let's talk tomorrow! I wish you a wonderful Monday!
~Teacher Jin

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