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The impeachment agenda is passed!!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
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The new good news~! The impeachment agenda is passed just before! There are still problems, but we're cheering for passing the impeachment agenda~ Cheers~!

The most of popular Korean traditional foods are being fermented foods.
My son boasted his picture that he drawed at the school.
The boss of the opposite party convened all members to the Assembly.
I saw her yesterday, she weared a pricey watch.
There is a must-try that when you enter that company at the first time.
Korean president planed to dominate the country.
All citizens account the president to a traitor.
튜터 교정 답변

Good news! The impeachment motion has just passed. There are still some problems, but we're cheering for its success. Cheers!

The most of popular Korean traditional foods are being fermented foods.
My son boasted about the picture he drew at the school.
The leader of the opposing party convened all members of the Assembly.
I saw her yesterday, and she was wearing a pricey watch.
There is a must-try  when you enter the company for the first time.
The Korean president planned to dominate the country.
All citizens consider the president to a traitor.

 

Cheers! I'm so happy for you all! I hope this continues for the betterment of your country. Let's talk tomorrow! Have a nice day!

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