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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 15 조회 13193

Please check my sentences

작성자: 1475177 담당 튜터: Chloe2
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Hi~~ Chloe this is Steve.

Please check my sentences. Have a nice day!!

- I’m a person who likes to get out and experience new things.

- To achieve my goals, I will more and more try.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello Steve! Happy Thursday! Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

Hi~~ Chloe this is Steve. Please check my sentences. Have a nice day!! - I’m a person who likes to get out and experience new things. - To achieve my goals, I like to try and try until I succeed.

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