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This is second essay!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Koera is too cold.. I need warm weather! Anyway, have a happy day~

They approximately succeed the goal, but the time was shortage.
This job requires immediacy and accuracy.
The firm decided to incorporate the affiliated companies.
We have to repurpose our new product for next season.
These entities have meat as a staple.
Our team leader has remarkable perception.
Most of people feel nostalgia when they came across something have their youth.
All students need to peruse the main school rules before entering.
This brand had had only online stores, but now they built a brick and mortar stores.
튜터 교정 답변

Korea is too cold. I need warm weather! Anyway, Have a happy day!

They approximately reached the goal, but there was a shortage of time.
This job requires immediacy and accuracy.
The firm decided to incorporate the affiliated companies.
We have to repurpose our new product for next season.
These entities have meat as a staple food.
Our team leader has remarkable perception.
Most people feel nostalgia when they come across something from their youth.
All students need to peruse the main school rules before entering.
This brand had only online stores, but now they have built a brick-and-mortar stores.

 

Hi, Jin! You did an amazing job here! Keep up the good work!

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