Missed winter vacation
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My kids started their winter vacation.
The vacation is needed to take a rest, experience something that they want to do,
read some books, study the subjects.
When I was young... I planed many things that I like to do for spending my cool vacation. For this vacation, I lose my weight, learn English vocabulary(5,000 or more), read 100 books and so on. But it was just perfect paper plans. !!! HaHa..
If I came back the time again, I’d love to play cheerfully.
To teacher
You’re fixing my missentences and replacing the right sense of vocabularies. Thank you for your teaching.
The vacation is needed to take a rest, experience something that they want to do,
read some books, study the subjects.
When I was young... I planed many things that I like to do for spending my cool vacation. For this vacation, I lose my weight, learn English vocabulary(5,000 or more), read 100 books and so on. But it was just perfect paper plans. !!! HaHa..
If I came back the time again, I’d love to play cheerfully.
To teacher
You’re fixing my missentences and replacing the right sense of vocabularies. Thank you for your teaching.
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