Travel to Taichung in Taiwan
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I picked Taichung as a last vacation destination in 2024.
Taichung was a place i visited 5 years ago.
So I didn't need to make a detailed plan. I decided what to do next day before going to bed.
Last travel I only did a city tour, but this time I visited where I could enjoy Taiwan nature.
There was the largest lake in Taiwan about 1 hour half away from the city It was so big that I couldn't walk around it, I had to ride a bike or cruise to go around it.
And I visited a night market on the last night in 2024 to enjoy Taiwan foods. There were so many people and the streets were so crowded.
Taichung was a place i visited 5 years ago.
So I didn't need to make a detailed plan. I decided what to do next day before going to bed.
Last travel I only did a city tour, but this time I visited where I could enjoy Taiwan nature.
There was the largest lake in Taiwan about 1 hour half away from the city It was so big that I couldn't walk around it, I had to ride a bike or cruise to go around it.
And I visited a night market on the last night in 2024 to enjoy Taiwan foods. There were so many people and the streets were so crowded.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!