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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 01. 17 조회 2793

Turn out / Turn down

작성자: hri1_minuk.sung@hlco 담당 튜터: FionaA2usa
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Korean older women like watching TV drama with complicated family or romantic relations.
For example, the story is that it turns out that the woman who is a nice guy loves is one of his family member that he was separated from when he was young. So he has no choice but to turn her down so as to break heart.
튜터 교정 답변

Korean older women like watching TV drama series with complicated family or romantic relations.
For example, In this story  it turns out that the woman meets a  a nice guy  who she falls in love with  but eventually turns out to be an enstraged  family member. She unfortunately has no choice but to turn  down his marriage proposal .

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