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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 01. 30 조회 2633

Bad rumors about me

작성자: hri1_minuk.sung@hlco 담당 튜터: FionaA2usa
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Most of people had at least one bad rumor spread about them when they were young. I also had that rumor when I think about it.
I heard that I loved a girl who was unpopular and ugly so no one cared about her.
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Most of people had at least one bad rumor spread about them when they were young. I also had that rumor when I think about it.
I heard that I loved a girl who was unpopular and ugly so no one cared about her.

 

Most people have atleast one bad rumour spread about them when they are young. My personal  experience involved one of the unpopular girls, I was  rumoured to be having an affair with.

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