목록으로 돌아가기
공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 02. 13 조회 2596

My favorite person.

작성자: kolon_202100137 담당 튜터: FionaA2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My favorite person is husbund.
He makes me comfortable and I feel most like myself when I'm with him.
That's reason to decided marry him.
I like trip whit my husbund on Weekends.
This is my healing time.
튜터 교정 답변

My favorite person is husbund.
He makes me comfortable and I feel most like myself when I'm with him.
That's reason to decided marry him.
I like trip whit my husbund on Weekends.
This is my healing time.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!