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[Homework] Correnction

작성자: mangolang_hjhwang@lg 담당 튜터: TasH2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. I've been travels many places today.
--> I've been to many places today. or I traveled to a lot of places today.
2. We discuss about the orientation.
--> We were discussing orientation of the lecture.
3. Get a new name card for the professor.
--> I got a new name card as professor.
4. I went to the market to laundry shop.
--> I went to the market to visit laundry shop.
5. As you know that, like a steroid makes a immunity.
--> As you know that a steroid makes a immunity.
6. The position medium low, maybe the 5 level.
--> The level of the steroid is medium low.
튜터 교정 답변

HI SILVIA! Nice work on your corrections. heart
Don't be disheartened by small challenges like missing articles ("a," "an," "the")—they're common hurdles for many learners.
Your dedication and hard work are truly inspiring. Keep pushing forward, and you'll continue to make remarkable progress!

Please take note of the below; 
1. I've been travels many places today.
--> I've been to many places today. or I traveled to a lot of places today. yeslaugh
 

2. We discuss about the orientation.
--> We were discussing orientation of the lecture. sad
CORRECTION: We were discussing the orientation of the lecture. wink


3. Get a new name card for the professor.
--> I got a new name card as professor. sad  
CORRECTION: I got a new name card as a professor. wink


4. I went to the market to laundry shop.
--> I went to the market to visit laundry shop. sad 
CORRECTION: I went to the market to visit the laundry shop. 

 

5. As you know that, like a steroid makes a immunity.
--> As you know that a steroid makes a immunity.sad
CORRECTION: As you know, a steroid can boost immunity.wink


6. The position medium low, maybe the 5 level.
--> The level of the steroid is medium low.yeslaugh

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