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Lottery

작성자: yanadoo-37_hcc451726 담당 튜터: JeffGr2usa
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I haven't bought lottery because it has a small chance of winning prise. i think that is waste money. but if i win the lottery? i'm gonna travel whole world. when i in a America i could meet jeff. and i in Japan i could buy anime shop. I excited just thinking about it.
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I haven't bought a lottery because it has a small chance of winning a prize. I think that it is a waste of money. but if I did win the lottery... I would travel all over the world. Then when I am in America I could meet jeff. and when I travel to  Japan I would be able to visit an anime shop. I am excited just thinking about it.

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