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Part1

작성자: tenrain 담당 튜터: Heni2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I want to be a mathematician in the future. The person I respect is mathematician. Huh Jun E of Korea He is known for being awarded the Fields Medal, a prize that is greater than the Nobel Prize. Actually, his skill in math was not that good when he was young, but he had many opportunities to become a mathematician. Plus, his curiosity about math led him to become a mathematician. Now, he has successfully solved numerous mathematical problems through experimentation, including Rota's conjecture.
튜터 교정 답변

I want to be a mathematician in the future. The person I respect is mathematician. Huh Jun E of Korea He is known for being awarded the Fields Medal, a prize that is greater than the Nobel Prize. Actually, his skill in math was not that good when he was young, but he had many opportunities to become a mathematician. (Plus,) ( IT WOULD BE BETTER TO SAY: Moreover, or Furthermore,)  his curiosity about math led him to become a mathematician. Now, he has successfully solved numerous mathematical problems through  experimentation, including Rota's conjecture.

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